On Thursday we talked about bullies - it's part of 'kia kaha' our topic. Here is my story to tell about bullies. Bullies do things that threaten people. Mostly they leave people out, talk about them, push them and do other things. People can be bullies, other people bully them too. Some bullies get very mad when they get bullied, bullies can kick, hit and punch and do other bad things. Most bullies go and pick on the same person that they bullied the other day but other bullies also pick on new kids. If a parent becomes a bully they may have been bullied too by big people like them. Parents can bully children in another way instead like tell them to house work for them or take their money. Bullies can be with a team (or a gang). The most number a bully can be in a team or (gang) the number could be 4 or 3. Big bullies can bully young people; day after day the young kid gets stressed out that he might be hurt. Later on he could turn into a bully and bully others. When people get bullied they could still be bullied when they grow up. To stop a grown- up bully you could phone the police or run out of the house, go to a neighbour (if you know them) or you can go to a friend in your block.Your friends could become a bully too. Small kids are strong too, it doesn't always have to be a big strong person.
by Jessica
WOW i think that i the best and the longest story i have ever had i really enjoyed that
ReplyDeleteSerena
thank you serena it took a long time...
ReplyDeleteJessica
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW! I can't Write that much!-_-I think I write quickly but I can write only ten lines. Room 11 has got a code. If you don't know about it, go on Rm 11's blog with a Ipod(Ipad or Iphone)and get the code scanner for free! Use it to uncover the code because I did it! Try it!Oh ya and Jessica's writing. You think someone can beat you with 15 lines! Hope lots of kids love your comment. bye!
ReplyDeleteSorry... I forgot to write my name from up the one that starts with woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow!
ReplyDeleteBy Sakura
well Sakura i'm going to get a ipad so maybe i could that
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Jessica
Wait i mean thats cool thing i made (story) well you did a great comment Sakura
ReplyDeleteBy Jessica
awesome bullieing work Jessica
ReplyDeleteColin
I love your comment.Great work.If someone bullies someone 2. Then someone 2 will be a bullie.But if your a bullie all the way through you live your will become a bad person.by Keenan
ReplyDeleteWow!!! I've never seen such great writing in my entire life. Great job Jessica.
ReplyDeleteFrom Emily
thanks
ReplyDeleteJessica
Great job Jessica !! you make such as a good effort.
ReplyDeleteBullying is NO NO in this country,we need to respect everyone doesn't matter what they are look like.
Jessica's Mum
Mila