Tuesday, 20 March 2012

MILK poem by Keenan

M.i.l.k poem.

Garden

brothers,friends.

laughing, enjoying, joking.

blue t-shirt, straw hat.     

“I love telling funny jokes”.


by Keenan

10 comments:

  1. i did that milk poem

    Serena

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  2. thats great by XX

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  3. Keenan I think that your writing is great . I hope I could be is good as you. By Max.

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  4. Keenan, The two old men picture was really funny. I enjoyed doing the milk poem and it was fun. Some pictures were funny and some were sad. I laughed at some pictures.
    From Eric

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  5. wow! that is some good writing
    Sean

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  6. We have been learning about milk poems. The mum and the baby were having a staring competition. but I don't know? The baby might be saying now stop looking at me. I liked the two old men who were having a really funny joke.
    by Ryo.

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  7. I love your poem I really enjoyed reading it great job!
    Anna

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  8. i love your MILK poem Serena its the best ;D
    Jessica

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  9. The two men looked really happy.It was a good picture to choose.Great job!

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  10. Sorry I forgot to put my name on the one that stated with the two men looked really happy
    Anna

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