,(Tamzin) I think baby Adam was so cute when he played with the baby toys. I like it when baby Adam had fun and when we sang the hello and goodbye song. I like it when he was so cute on the roller. I had fun watching him.
Monday, 12 March 2012
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(Sakura) I think baby Adam was so cute! I liked the part when he giggled and tried to get a flappy soft book on the roller. I never knew he can giggle and laugh so loud! His mum(Candice)said that he can't say a word yet. Soon we saw him playing with the toys. It was looking really fun. Do you think he's cute?.We sang a goodbye song and he went . I liked the way he laughed so cutely.
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ReplyDeleteBy Sakura
i think.... 100% great and tamzin's
ReplyDeleteJessica
I think baby Adam was so cute when he was on the roller trying to get the toy. I like it when we sang the hello and good bye song. I had fun watching Adam.
ReplyDeleteBy Samantha
I agree with Tamzin- Baby Adam is so cute when he plays with his baby toys. Great piece of writing Tamzin.
ReplyDeleteFrom Emily
Sakura
ReplyDeleteI thought that baby Adam was so cute too when he was trying to get the book.
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